Doubtfulness

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Doubtfulness

When you have a loving heart,

you have every right to sing.

To laugh to play to have some fun

you can do anything.

When you have a broken heart,

you want to cry all night.

you stay silent among others,

you wish you could escape form sight.

But when you have an unsure heart,

you don't know what to do.

to cry to laugh to go away,

you just wish the doubtfulness was through.

You hope that no one will ever know,

how confused you feel.

But when you speak up to someone,

your wound will start to heal.

If you never say when your hurt,

you will never be okay.

You'll stay in your dark corner,

crying your heart away.




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when I read it, it felt sad but I couldn't stop reading. this is why I love other poetry... :)
Our happiness here is all vain glory,
This false world is but transitory,
The flesh is weak, the Fiend is slee
Timor mortis conturbat me.
--William Dunbar



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