Welcome to heaven

2 posts

Was this a touching poem?

  • yes No votes
  • no 100%

Total votes: 1

Random avatar
littlezeus92
Gender Male
Points 890
Reviews 8
Fri Dec 21, 2007 12:50 am
littlezeus92 says... · Fri Dec 21, 2007 12:50 am
author has deleted account
Last edited by littlezeus92 on Wed Jan 02, 2008 3:08 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Quote




User avatar
jenni321
Gender Female
Points 340
Reviews 37
Sun Dec 23, 2007 2:18 pm
jenni321 says... · Sun Dec 23, 2007 2:18 pm
It's really good, but there are some lines that have too many syllables, it kinda messes up the beat. but other than that, it's pretty good. Keep writing!


jenni321
On a scale of 1 to Random, I'm pretty ADHD.
Quote

2 posts


Follow your inner moonlight; don't hide the madness
— Allen Ginsburg