Critique exchange

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Anyone up for a crit exchange? I'll review any one thing in your portfolio if you review any one thing in mine.

Come on...how can you pass up an offer like this?
"Hey look! A black shooting star!"

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I'm going to move this to the lounge... Doesn't really fit here. Eh. Ish.
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Okay, let's EXCHANGE!
my world isn't only beautiful
it is so far away




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I posted the exact same idea in the Writing Activities section and nobody answered it. You guys suck.
there are many problems in our times
but none of them are mine




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I wanna do it!!! I'll go and critique something right now!!!


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Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.




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Aw, I'm sorry, Icaruss! If I had seen your post, I would definitely have responded to it.
"Hey look! A black shooting star!"

"That's no star...that's Fangala!"




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It's alright. I'll play, though.

Wanna have a go?
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If you're looking for another critique I'd be happy to swap.
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Whoa, I haven't checked this topic in forever! Sorry, guys. I'll get right on those reviews.
"Hey look! A black shooting star!"

"That's no star...that's Fangala!"



"And what is the use of a book," thought Alice, "without pictures or conversations?"
— Lewis Carroll, Alice in Wonderland