City of Ashes

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Sun Dec 16, 2007 10:26 pm
Wolf says... · Sun Dec 16, 2007 10:26 pm
Thanks Gwen!
I'll try reading it out loud; maybe I'll notice something I can improve on flow-wise.
everything i loved
became everything i lost.

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Now I realize that there is no righteous path, it’s just people trying to do their best in a world where it is far too easy to do your worst.
— Castiel