Please, I'd like some good reviews. Heheh.. it was kind of random, so I don't expect it to be very good. I wanted to get opinions on it, though.
Everything's dark
Not a sound in the night
Until a swift motion
Shifts to my right
A cold touch of a hand
And I sharply yelp
A whimper I let go
With fright I yell "Help!"
Who could it be?
What could they want?
A female, I can hear
The hiss she gives
Her feminine voice
One who scares any that lives
"Please," I beg as a breeze passes us two
"Take my money if you wish
But leave me be, I beg of you!"
Alas, no avail.
A sharp prick in the neck
This feeling, I hate it
Burning pain washes over me
Uncomfortable heat like a blanket
Two fangs withdraw from my neck
Blood, I can feel
Warm blood being drank
Is this for real?
Within moments I'm numb
Unable to feel a thing
My vision fades to darkness
My mind begins to ring
My life flashes in my mind's eye
Death, I can tell is nearing
Now on the ground I do lie
