I love this poem! The choice of most of the words clearly conveys the sensuality. Except for the phrase "Made In..." I think that it breaks the flow, and when I think of Made In China, I think of cheap little golden stickers on everything I buy, not a beautiful instrument, worthy of praise. But besides that little detail, the rest of the poem is superb! Very good!
Be happy, my friend; and if you obey me in this one request, remain satisfied that nothing on earth will have the power to interrupt my tranquility. — Mary Shelley, Frankenstein
