With Wood and Resin

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I love this poem! The choice of most of the words clearly conveys the sensuality. Except for the phrase "Made In..." I think that it breaks the flow, and when I think of Made In China, I think of cheap little golden stickers on everything I buy, not a beautiful instrument, worthy of praise. But besides that little detail, the rest of the poem is superb! Very good!



"The trouble with Borrowing another mind was, you always felt out of place when you got back to your own body, and Granny was the first person ever to read the mind of a building. Now she was feeling big and gritty and full of passages. 'Are you all right?' Granny nodded, and opened her windows. She extended her east and west wings and tried to concentrate on the tiny cup held in her pillars."
— Terry Pratchett, Discworld: Equal Rites