The Beast Within

awesome. i like your imagery. and its very interesting how you used 'she' to describe. not many people put a werewolf in the female gender. i ocmmend you. ^_^ *round of applause*

also...like the others have said...the line "Late at night it comes clawing at the door, human no more.", is kind of long and awkward-ish. my suggestion is you take out the door part altogether.

----> "late at night it comes clawing, human no more."

but, really, this is a really neat poem. full of emotion. i can feel the rage. good job!!

Thank you very much, I will be fixing the Human no more line soon, Please check out my other work!

Very cool, it gives you the kinda feeling that makes you feel the pain it is feeling.
Very cool.