The Dragon's Rage Chapter 3 part 1

Chapter 3 part 1


Jimmi: Hello? are you okay?

John: let me handle this, are you okay mister?

Mister: what? oh yeah im fine im just pretending to be injured cuz the huns don't attack people that are already injured

Professor: Ha Ha i love my chicken patty

Jimmi: uh prof? thats a cactus

Prof: this is a pointy chicken patty

shyrl:.....

John: ok lets get on with our journey

Mister: what journey?

Jimmi OH let me tell him, well u see our intelligent leader.....

3 hours later

Mister: wow ur pretty much a dumbass

John: shut up

Mister: k since u guys are all complete morons, ill help you defeat the dragon

Jimmi: i dont think we can acept that help

John: y not

Jimmi: cuz i dont want to kill some random guy that accidently got involved

John: fine we'll find out his name, then he wont dbe random

Jimmi: fine whats your name

Mister: Leif, my name is leif

rather short. POst more. I really do enjoy your writing. Really amuses me!

You wrote this in a chat room didn't you?

There are too many spelling and grammatical errors to fit. In thirty seconds, let me see what I can do.

Ur=Your.
cuz=Because
y=why
im=I'm
lets=let's
i=I
whats=what's
k=okay

And many more.

This story should really have quotation marks to indicate dialogue, not colons. You can get away with it for scripts, but scripts are even more structured than novels (albeit in a different way.)

i didnt have much time to write this part, cuz it was during my lunch so i thought id work on it, i kinda just sped through without looking it over