A Goodbye

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Last edited by TheEccentricScribe on Thu Nov 06, 2008 3:14 am, edited 2 times in total.




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I like it. :)

Although, I can't help thinking that stanza 4, line 1 finishes a word early. Couldn't you move 'love' up a line? (So that it reads, 'Maybe there in the stars the one you love/waits for you, but until then').
I wrote the above just for you.



In the winter months, snowstorms and rainfall in the Patagonian Ice Fields can drastically affect the landscape. Worsened by heavy winds, such storms can reduce visibility and lead to glacial calving, ice collapses, and avalanches. During these conditions, travel is not advised.
— The Documentarian