Hello Everybody, I'm new at this

Well my name is Ryan and yes I'm of Irish Descent; hence, the irish user name of Seamus. [Four is my lucky number too]

I think I'll post a poem...........[I write poetry that rhymes, by the way]

Erroneous Love

I feel like givin up, feel that I'm not even enough
I feel like throwin in the towl
I feel like jus' walking away
You know I love you girl you're a dream thats come true
I wanna be with you till like forever or till through on through
I don't want to wake up from this constant dream....
AN people say this is erroneous love or so it may seem
But people will say what they want
But still don't care what they say
An people will do what they like
But As long as your mine I'm still okay
'Cause I still love you, girl, an I jus' want
Want everything you have to offer me
And to hear you call me 'your hun'
If not me, I still want to see you happy
I'm tired of being alone; tired of secretly crying
Jus' so sick of people kickin me when I'm down still I'm trying
To get back up to be beaten back down
When it jus' feels like I'm punching brick walls
An if you think that alls alot, then we weren't meant to be
I just want some one nice who'd not make me cry
But that'd make me so happy and feel like I can fly
Erroneous love, to me there is no such thing
So say what you like but I might not agree

Hello Seamus!!! Welcome to YWS ( I love this place) Anyway... Uh, If you wanna post something, at the top of the screen is a 'forums' button, wait for that to scroll down, then go to literary.

Find what section you think the poem belongs in, then hit 'new topic' and just put the peom in there. Don't worry about it. I had no idea where to post my stuff when I first came here. Pm me if you need anything! ^_^


~Pol~

Welcome to the YWS! ^_^ Sorry to say this right-off-the bat, but poems are usually posted in the poetry forums....0_o Haha, that sounded rather condescending, didn't it? ^_^ The base of that is, you probably won't get 'tiques if you post it in the wrong forum.

I'm Inky, feel free to PM me if you have any questions on the site.

Do you write other kinds of poetry? Stories? Favorite author?

Welcome to the site, Ryan!


Just so you know, you can put your poetry in the poetry section ^.~ It probably won't get many critiques here!

If you have any questions about the site or need help finding something feel free to contact me and I can help you out. Enjoy the site!

hey! nice poem, although it sounds more like a song than a poem to me. and i'm Irish as well. well, at least my grandparents were Irish...so yeah...I'm technically American i s'pose.