Melnikov #11 /P

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Gah, what's the name! lol. I loved the Kyle/Jonness, especially when they're being so cute towards each other. I love Jon's little moments.

"Me?" Kyle said incredulously. "What was that rule?"

"What?"

"The one about not making loud noises in the museum?"

*XD that was hilarious.
Now I need to what that name is! Lol, it appears that Kyle is still the smart person he's always been. If only I knew what he's found! Can't wait for the next!

~Rieda
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