help me please

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this is a call out for help! (call me a loser if u wish) but im in love and have trouble describing it. so all of you who are good at writing please help me out and write something. cuse ive tryed and i dont think i do it justice. so anyone who wants to write somthing that describes the way one person can feel about the other please do!!!
I love Eryn Marie and there isent a thing you can do to stop me!!!!!




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Ubi caritas est vera, Deus ibi est.

"The mark of your ignorance is the depth of your belief in injustice and tragedy. What the caterpillar calls the end of the world, the Master calls the butterfly." ~ Richard Bach

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Um... first of all, welcome to YWS! Second of all... you mean how to write romances? What attributes from the other person do you like? Why do you like the person? Is there anything special that you went through? Is there something about her that reminds you of something pretty? Use all of these things to write something beautiful.
Ubi caritas est vera, Deus ibi est.

"The mark of your ignorance is the depth of your belief in injustice and tragedy. What the caterpillar calls the end of the world, the Master calls the butterfly." ~ Richard Bach

Moth and Myth <- My comic! :D



I was flummoxed by fractious Franny's decision to abrogate analgesics for the moribund victims of the recent conflagration. Of course, to display histrionics was discretionary, but I did so anyways, implicating a friend in my drama to make the effect cumulative. I think a misanthrope would have a prosaic appellation, perhaps one related to autonomy and the rejection of anthropocentrism. I think they wouldn't think much of the prominence of watching the coagulation of tea to prognosticate future malevolent events, not even if those events were related to jurisprudence.
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