Prosthesis #66 /P

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Incandescence
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Sun Jun 10, 2007 8:32 pm
Incandescence says... · Sun Jun 10, 2007 8:32 pm
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Emerson
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Mon Jun 11, 2007 12:41 am
Emerson says... · Mon Jun 11, 2007 12:41 am
....WTF...?

That was just the freakiest thing I ever read.

did...Ariel just get up after her head being twisted 180 degrees? Yeah. Creepy, Brad, creepy. Freaked me out.

ummm weird. Obviously the presence possessed Sarah or...something? Ariel deserved it. But why isn't she dead!? *squirms* nasty.
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Thu Jun 14, 2007 2:59 am
Riedawriter23 says... · Thu Jun 14, 2007 2:59 am
I'm really confused but it's a good confused!!! I'm guessing this is all the Opal in Jon's eye taking affect? ...if I'm wrong then I'm with Clau, Ariel is very creepy. Go Sarah though! I've been waiting for even a scene when Ariel was torn to pieces whether it was real or not.
I understand that Sarah is possessed and Kyle...went back for her? Of course that's something he would do but, I don't know. I just can't wait to read the next to see what happens!!! Great Job Brad, loved this one!

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