Prosthesis #64 /P

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Incandescence
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Sun Jun 10, 2007 4:47 am
Incandescence says... · Sun Jun 10, 2007 4:47 am
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Emerson
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Sun Jun 10, 2007 4:58 am
Emerson says... · Sun Jun 10, 2007 4:58 am
aieee... You kill me with this, Dear Brad.

I won't argue over the 'help' thing... ech. Ariel is a major b-, and Jon makes me want to cry!! *gasp* It's so sad!!!

*deep breath* This is thrilling, and I love it. Please tell me I get to learn what the black goo does soon? This chapter was so loaded. It was awesome-o-rific!
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Sun Jun 10, 2007 5:03 am
Riedawriter23 says... · Sun Jun 10, 2007 5:03 am
:( I can't believe Ariel was going to make Jon kill himself. Pull the trigger? She's freaking crazy, man, like seriously. But I do think that Jon can get through to her. Jon has the power to do things like that, you know like calm people and change people...in a good way, but also in a bad way. I just hope that if he does happen to get through to Ariel, that he kills her afterwards while she's distracted ;) . Can't wait to read the next, Great Pros.!

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