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winie603
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Wed May 30, 2007 11:06 pm
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Wed May 30, 2007 11:06 pm
This story is about birds, fictional though/
Leja
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Wed May 30, 2007 11:08 pm
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Wed May 30, 2007 11:08 pm
Umm, is there more to the story? You should post enough story here to critique.
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Wed May 30, 2007 11:20 pm
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Wed May 30, 2007 11:20 pm
Uh, yeah, it's a story about birds. Great. All fine and dandy, fantasmagorically FAN-tastic.
So where is it?
Sheesh, how can I crit a thing if the thing isn't there to crit??
-Twit
"TV makes sense. It has logic, structure, rules, and likeable leading men. In life, we have this. We have you." -Abed Nadir
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Wed May 30, 2007 11:21 pm
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Wed May 30, 2007 11:21 pm
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*Moved to Randomness*
Ubi caritas est vera, Deus ibi est.
"The mark of your ignorance is the depth of your belief in injustice and tragedy. What the caterpillar calls the end of the world, the Master calls the butterfly." ~ Richard Bach
Moth and Myth
<- My comic!
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Wed May 30, 2007 11:38 pm
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Wed May 30, 2007 11:38 pm
One day there was a bird and Chuck Norris punched it in the face.
CRIT TIME!
Gotta a find a woman be good to me,
Who won't hide my liquor, try to serve me tea.
Emerson
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Wed May 30, 2007 11:40 pm
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Wed May 30, 2007 11:40 pm
That is the bestest story I ever read EBM!
You rock my Chuck Norris themed socks!
βIt's necessary to have wished for death in order to know how good it is to live.β
β Alexandre Dumas,
The Count of Monte Cristo
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