The Lonley Fish

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Splash
species: Fish
Color: sea Green
Height: 2 inches

Bio: He is all alone he has no family.
His parens died in a horrible shark attack that took both of their lives. Splash felt that it was all his fault. He had to start a new life it was hard but he made it.




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Uhm.

Hey.

Maybe you should try posting Splash's story, so we can read and critique it?




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*moved to Writer's Corner for the time being*
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Sorry to confuse you so, but this is extremely random, so...

*moved to Randomness*
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This looks like the start of a storybook to me. xD Where was it originally?
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It was originally in Action/Adventure Fiction. I moved it to Writer's Corner and PMed the author about it. He told me it was the beginning of a storybook, so if anyone could move it to storybooks, twould be great.

I apologize for the misunderstanding.
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*Moved to Storybooks*

Make sure the posts go in the right forum.
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Um...is there anything to go off of here?




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Splash is looking for a home is the wild ocean. Where will he go?
He has no friends and does not know how to hunt. After a long night of hunting for a house he finds a sea anemone. Just like Finding Nemo. He goes on a huge adventure and ends up getting almost eat by a seagull. He has lost all hope in himself and would love someone to tell him what happens next. \\
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