Prosthesis #9 /P

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"If I have not seen as far as others, it is because giants were standing on my shoulders." -Hal Abelson




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That was a surprising ending. Ch. is still at it?! Omg does that mean that Ariel is still a "bad" person? hehe, I'm still trying to figure out how Kyle could possibly marry her, maybe she had given up her old ways? Maybe Kyle had joined her and then Ch. shut down? I don't know, but this is like the most interesting thing ever! I never know what to expect, not even with clues!

I'm going to read the next because the anticipation is killing me and my fingers are screwing up my responces Lol.

I love it Bradness!
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Intrigued. I saw 2 mistakes. Little typos.

Caroline sat back and put her over the gun, "capable of unspeakable evil."


You missed a word in there.

A news reported stood as wind tossled her hair and helicopters swooped by overhead. She was discussing the damage done by the fusion bomb.


Reporter. You used a dinstead of an r.

I like it. Great continuation of the story. You really keep things moving. I like the President Clinton dealy. Making a prediction are you? :)
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*glee* aw this makes me want to finish Ch. Even more....*pouts*

Nobody thought John Wayne Gacy was capable of raping and murdering thirty-three boys.
I remember you taling to me about Gacy :-p

And, by chance, was that you making a prediction for the '08 election? I cracked up.

I'd really die to know the science behind this; is something like this actually, if not theoretically, possible? This is like...insane. I love it.
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Clau--


Theoretically it is very possible. Fusion energy is clean and immensely powerful. Current estimates for a "fusion bomb" diffused by Uranium-separation determine that roughly half of Australia could be wiped out with said-bomb. Part of what I am doing for both of Chionophobia and Prosthesis is appending hand-written notes and calculations that we are considering putting in the appendix of the novels. That would be done mostly for the mythological arc of the story more than actual science, though.

The big physical limitation on fusion technology is that separating an ion, which results in a tremendous amount of force and power, has a correspondingly high level of difficulty in maintaining in a stable state. You can probably Google the topic for some more information.


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Brad
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Hilary Clinton? -cocks eyebrow-
Nice touch, that was.

I never new she was capable of compassion, though
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