XD this is one crazy man you've created Brad! But of course interesting and I love it. What I loved the most was that, as you were going into the scientific words and such, I actually understood! (*gasp* I know!)... Besides that, it was wonderful. I'm really getting into this and so far it's only given away parts of Ch. I still want to finish that by they way, and I know I'll have to wait, I'm just telling you that I shall finish it one way or another.
Can't wait to read more!
~Rieda
I love, love.
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Dang, I am SO far behind. Think I could catch up in one night? XD
That was really good. I want to know the science behind what ever the heck is going on but... Since I don't even know what is going on...there isn't much chance of me being told one, or the other. Loved it.
“It's necessary to have wished for death in order to know how good it is to live.” ― Alexandre Dumas, The Count of Monte Cristo
A Uranium bomb strong enough to submerge the entire western coast?
Gah. I don't believe it. Plutonium with a water boost? If laced unter the san andreas fault, yeah. But again, I want to know the Science behind this Fiction.
Cuz the random Sci Fi injection here is a nice change of pace, but rather unexplored.
The good parts of a book may be only something a writer is lucky enough to overhear or it may be the wreck of his whole damn life — and one is as good as the other.
Ernest Hemingway
