A Lost Carol: Introduction #1 /P

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something that according to the New York Times had become "bizarrely complicated...bloated and trivial...hyped-up," and I didn't necessarily disagree

**XD, hehe, I love this so far. It's very Brad of you :). Still great word usage, and something your fans can really relate to. Lol, great job so far! Tell me when you've written the next.

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*sigh* Besides the coke, this really makes me want to suceed as a writer! This is really good so far! I love the fame and the drugs and everything! Lol, I didn't even expect it to turn out like this, but I'm loving it. Tell me when the next is posted!

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You're really quick. Tis becoming wonderful Brad. I love your first person writing. Very different from Pros. and Ch. and yet so appealing. Great Job!

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Kyle and Ariel? *gasp*

This is getting so good. Personally I think Pros. is amazing. Disturbing is like the Earth's misplaced halo. Everyone's drawn to it whether they'll admit it or not. XD. That actually makes sense in my own little way. Great job. :)

Edit 5/6/07 - XD, this is getting funnier and funnier. Sort of scary, I hope this isn't your future *gasp*. But, hilarious all the same. Imagining you as a pink marshmallow in front of a laptop was sort of hard but eventually I had an idea of what you'd look like *shudders*. And I'd want to see the miny Brad, a little version of you running around XD. Can't wait for the next Brad!

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Also present was Jack Dent, who had recently published his first novel as well, A Sky So Deeply Red, that had more or less inadvertently been read as a question of belief and ideology rather than entertainment and had become an instant overnight success. Despite the stark contrasts, there was a whole menagerie of reviews comparing our novels and investigating what this meant about the coming generation. As one critic pointed out, "If you strip the superficial plotlines away, both novels ask the same question: how can we believe in anything?" and since we were photographed together so often, people began to mix the two of us up. To simplify things, the New York Press referred to us simply as the "Toxic Twins."


Legendary. *laughs again* I love this whole story, it's so amusing.
Nate wrote:And if YWS ever does become a company, Jack will be the President of European Operations. In fact, I'm just going to call him that anyways.



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