Prosthesis #16 /P

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Incandescence
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Mon Apr 02, 2007 4:46 pm
Incandescence says... · Mon Apr 02, 2007 4:46 pm
Removed.
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Riedawriter23
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Tue Apr 03, 2007 4:30 am
Riedawriter23 says... · Tue Apr 03, 2007 4:30 am
This was great! Kyle cried! and did Jon...just realize what was going on with him? Haha, that's really sad, he didn't get to see any of Kyle's real feelings as soon as he showed them. And Jon is captured again! This is getting better and better by the minute!

Loved it! Now I have another to read so that's it!

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Emerson
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Sun Apr 29, 2007 2:48 pm
Emerson says... · Sun Apr 29, 2007 2:48 pm
Look I'm reading again!

oooh I love emotions and random guys injecting stuff into jon.... ^_^ I have nothing else to say really...not actually a critique.

Ummm good job? Yes!
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