A funeral of Demons

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Hey Jig. Just reading back on some of your older stuff lol. Just one thing that I noticed that might be wrong, I think.

We rarely, if ever come out to honour a human’s passing. “We did it for Stalin and countless others.

I just think it seems like you're contradicting yourself a bit here. You said they rarely honour a humans passing, but it has been done for countless others?

Anyways lol, thanks for taking me back a year. It was a fun story. :) And gave me a bit of a surprise. I was just considering putting my story about someone who actually does attend their own funeral on here.




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Ah, but the contradiction there is intended. They rarely come out for a HUMAN's passing, the implication there was they came out for their fellow demons...type thing. At least thats what I intended lol.

Thanks for the comment, hehe.
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that was amazing. I love your humor. hahaha, wish i could write like that...but im getting there. haha. Seriously, this piece is very interesting and well written.
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I'm so surprised this is still getting commented on, haha, yay for digging in the cemetary of stories that is a persons Portfolio.
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Some cemetarys are fun. Your one has some interesting skeletons. ;)




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Hah, I remember reading this when I was still a new member.

Your writing's improved since you wrote this.
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Quite a bit, I'd say, old boy. Thanks for mentioning it though, that means a lot. Didn't appear that many had noticed, hehe.

Was there anything in particular that prompted that, or was it a general remark? Hehe, its just that, apart from 'Aliens' --which isnt too good--I cant remember you having commented on anything of mine lol.

Cheers.
Mah name is jiggleh. And I like to jiggle.

"Indecision and terror, thy name is novel." - Chiko



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