Prosthesis #13 /P

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Incandescence
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Mon Apr 02, 2007 3:01 am
Incandescence says... · Mon Apr 02, 2007 3:01 am
Removed.
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Riedawriter23
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Mon Apr 02, 2007 3:27 am
Riedawriter23 says... · Mon Apr 02, 2007 3:27 am
Awwww. That was such a cute one. Jon and Kyle,Kyle and Jon...it has a nice ring to it don't you think? Hehe, I love these ones, when Kyle figures that something is actually going on. I have a feeling that this isn't going to last but it's ALWAYS wonderful to read. I just feel like hugging someone now. Lol, *hugs Bradness* Thank you for writing a bomb diggity yet very sweet and sentimental Prosthesis!

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Sat Apr 07, 2007 4:18 am
Emerson says... · Sat Apr 07, 2007 4:18 am
Jon was all cleaned up, dressed in jeans and Kyle's t-shirt and asleep


but finding himself clean and in different clothes
Exactly where did they get these clothes if they were just in the middle of f'ing no where cave? Is Kyle shirtless now or something?

Then the dream thing. So Kyle knows Jon was harassed by Sarah because of the dream, or did I miss something again? If I didn't, and it was the dream that makes kyle know he was "being tortured by his ex-wife" I don't believe it much...Convince me more. Unless I'm on the entirely wrong track. Then tell me to shut up xD
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