LMS VII: for fruitful rainwater, and blankets cold

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and slow is the air around us

simple are the droplets of joy with you
laughing, or blushing away passing time.
momentarily, the feeling flutters,
and sinks softly down with me to your arms.

eyes like diamonds, smile like the climbing sun,
gentle is breeze bringing windswept hair,
lifted hearts, spinning headlessly and free,
gazes deep as the bottom of the ocean.

so tiny is the spark that begins it,
that begins the pushing of gravity,
hurling us to skies vast and infinite,
the space between the stars quiet and still.

steady is the string tying me to you,
or the constant speed of clouds drifting home.
my heart is full, my skin is warmer than
a summer flower's petals, and you are

running fields with me, at the speed of light.
Good is not a thing you are. It's a thing you do.
- Ms. Marvel

LuminescentAnt ~ Lum ~ Ant
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ahh your writing is so beautiful <3 it lifts my heart too to read this. some of my fav lines and phrases:

smile like the climbing sun

running fields with me, at the speed of light.


"picking the scab" is also very relatable, though i've experienced the sentiment mainly with the thought of leaving certain communities rather than dying. thinking, would anyone really miss me?

i am falling into the comfort of being close to you,
which is softer than the trickling rain,
sweeter than a shooting star that whispers gently,
quieter than a spool of string unraveling its color.

this is so cozy yet leaves me quietly breathless <3
mint, she/her


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Fairy Tales are more than true; not because they tell us that dragons exist, but because they tell us that dragons can be beaten.
— G.K. Chesterton