Omni Follows Novels

I'm looking to review novels! Really, I want to read novels but since we are a reviewing site I also want to review them.

What I'm Looking For:

• Novel w/ 5+ Chapters
• Actively being written (let's say last published under 3 months)
• Fantasy/Sci-Fi preferred

Ideally, I'd like to follow a couple of novels at a time. I'm not consistent with reviewing (I'm trying to get back into it!) so it may take me awhile. Around 5 reviews in, I'll check in with you here to see if you want me to continue with reviewing your work. No harm if not!

How I review:

• I review as I read
• Specific Breakdown w/ quotes
• Emphasis on the beginning
• Overall thoughts at the end
• Critique heavy (I promise I like what I read!)

Looking forward to following your novel!

Hi Omni! Guess I will make my first request then to get the ball rolling.
Hopefully novel-length fanfics count as novels?

World of Souls, World of Souls~

Technically I am failing to write the second part of this Digimon story (ah why am i doing this to myself qq) but well, can't get help on the second part if the first part doesn't yet exist in full on YWS.

I just like to hear ppl's opinion on these characters (and my take on them) and I'd love for you to also answer the questions at the end~

Spoiler

I know the first part has already been edited heavily but English is my second language and I feel like there is always room for improvement. PLUS! The beginning of the first chapter is pretty rushed but I am not sure how to change that without spending even more time away from the whole purpose of the story.

I am a writer of few descriptions and flashy fight scenes

@Tikaya fanfics totally count! I am not familiar with Digimon (besides some very old memories as a kid and seeing "weird Pokemon" on the tv) but I noticed in your WRFF thread that you're looking for folks not in the fandom to read and review. Just be patient please! I am a slow reviewer XD

hey omni! i know this definitely isn't sci-fi or fantasy, but if you want to review my lms novel, i'd be happy to have you! but totally up to you if it's not your thing. Prologue - Unnamed LMS VII Novel