(reviewer) Bard for hire

The bard returns!
Tell me if there's anything I need to know about your work, if you want me to review it in a certain way or focusing on specific elements, and give me a link to it! I shouldn't take more than two days to finish a review, and if I do I will let you know in advance. Please include (if needed, and you don't want a bog standard review) your song request too! Any of these can be slightly tweaked if you wish


Ballad: a longer review, which will include some extra topics you can specify

Ditty: a short and sweet review that gets to the point

Your Song: a fully customised review; you can specify anything down from the length to the structure I use, just remember to let me know of everything you want, so I don't forget anything

Lute Opera: better for longer pieces; the FULL package. The bard shall rant as long as he needs to, in this case.

Brisk Biography: the song to pick if you want advice/ overviews of your characters

Vicious Mockery: if you want as much constructive criticism as possible, this might be your bag. I doubt you'll take 1d6 psychic damage, either

Musical: a set multiple reviews (no more than three at a time, please) can be stacked with other song requests



I will review anything you need, from novel first drafts to sonnets; if you have any more questions, you can find me by the hearth strumming my lute, so feel free to ask.
Cheers, people of YWS!

Yo!! This is fantasy and just one chapter so far. Thanks!

The Illusionist Ch.1

Hi hope you are having a good day. Would you be interested in reviewing an ongoing fantasy novel about a siren and a deaf painter. I would love to have the Vicious Mockery review if you would be interested. Thank you and have a great day ahead!

I love this! XD I'd also love to receive the Lute Opera for my story To Paxaria (can be found in my portfolio on my profile). It's multiple chapters/parts so far, so you can feel free to just do one if it's too much to do them all.

Hello!!! I'm working on a larger novel, but don't worry I am only looking for reviews on one of the chapters. It is The Fall, chapter 16, it is about a dystopian society and it has some very dark topics. I am seeking criticism and a complex review of the work, as it is a major turning point in the novel as a whole. I would love to hear your Vicious Mockery, it sounds lovely. If you want context feel free to ask, since I have not published the rest of the chapters leading up to 16 as they are still going through the editing process. Thank you and I hope to hear from you!! Have a nice morning (or whatever time it is where you live) <3

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