Chionophobia #27 /P

Removed.

God I love this! This story is getting better and better with every Ch. I read. I make it a daily routine to keep up with this thing. That's major because usually I'm only into fantasy. Kyle is developing at a quick pace, Jon is changing, the cops are after both of them in a way, Sarah is still in play and action and then the suspence at the end that tells there is something dramatic to come kills me. Great Job!

-Rieda

he told himself it was what Kyle would have done.

Always. Though they hate each other so much, hurt each other so much, they always love each other, don't they? I love that aspect.

because then things [s]to[/s] start to blur and you forget yourself.

Jonathon stopped, unsure of whether he was being honest or trying to be redeemable, and he hated himself for that.

Does he hate himself for being unsure, for being honest, or for trying to be redeemable? The most likely one is the latter, but still it could be read as him hating the uncertainty. Unless only I see this.

. “I don’t [s]know[/s] even know what you’re talking about!”

she just wrote her emails.

Should the 'her' be 'him'? It depends on the meaning of it, really, "She just wrote to him [emails]" or "She just wrote her emails" as in the emails belong to 'her'. See my point? Maybe XD I think I confused myself even...

You know, I'm so putting my bets on Sarah. I put it on her last Ch, and I'm putting it on her on this one again. I suppose Chionophobia (Fear of snow, so I've heard?) Is the 'disease'? But these are all my guesses

Constantly loving how you work things. Come on, if you love me so much for being with Ch since it's inception, you're going to send me a signed copy, right?