Camp NovMo July '25: Playing With Fire

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Plume's Camp NovMo: Playing With Fire


(also known as Plume tries to write a play part 2 (emphasis on the word tries))

Background

This is me trying again to write another play. I feel like I can't really say "another" because I didn't finish the first one (oops) but it's fine. The reason I abandoned the other play (last year's camp novmo) was because it was existing in a weird place; the whole reason I wanted to write it was to perform it (well no duh it's a play) but the thing about doing it in college theater is that people don't really like it when your show has, like, four characters, and one of them is an infant. Every time I tried to turn it into an ensemble piece, it just felt like I was altering it too much. Any side plot I introduced felt contrived. So even though I loved the plot, I decided it probably wasn't destined to be done (at least, not while I'm in school).

BUT! I still want to write a show that hopefully gets performed (because that's so freakin' cool!!) So I got this other idea and that is this Camp NovMo's project! Yahoo!!

Premise

Cora LeBlanc is a Grade A Failure. So when she meets a man who promises the success she's always craved, she goes through the motions of every good quarter-life crisis -- quits her job (not that she liked it anyways), switches up her look, and even leaves her wife, Emmeline, all to pursue the dream she's claimed to always have: being a famous chef. What she doesn't expect, however, is Emmeline to fight back. Before long, Emmeline has opened up a restaurant right down the block from hers and starts cooking to her heart's content. And what's worse, she's good at it.

Playing With Fire is a comedy about frustration and passions, successes and failures, and most importantly: finding the recipe to a good life.


Basically, this is a new take on the trope of people leaving their spouses to pursue their dreams; I was thinking one day how frustrating and funny it would be if that happened and then the spouse who was left decides to pursue their spouse's dream and it turns out they're better than them at it. Plus it's a fun dynamic of lovers to rivals (and maybe back to lovers??!?) Point is, lots of opportunity for comedy and shenanigans and queer stories that aren't necessarily about being queer. I'm also very excited to write women being complex and petty and angry!! I am a big believer in women being allowed to make bad choices and mistakes in fiction (also in real life! no one is perfect!)

To sum it up: I'm very excited since it is full of my favorite things. Angry women. Queer women. Silly stuff. Food. That sort of passion that comes when you're mad at someone so much that you maybe just need to kiss about it. Women again <3

(I realize I mentioned women SO much and the reason is because recently I was in a student-written show by two women and for some reason all their female characters sucked? (as in poorly written; I would have loved if they had a female character who sucked as a person but was well written). Anyways it got me thinking that I want to do the opposite of what they did, hence the big focus on women. As a woman who is occasionally quite cringefail I just want more characters like that <3)

Goals

Now onto the most important part: my goals!! I think I'm going to try and set a super super feasible goal because I have never successfully stuck to my camp NovMo goals in the three years I've done it and this year that will change (I'm hoping). So! I'm making it my goal to write a scene a week. Which I get isn't super specific, but it's more suited to my writing style, I think. I picture each scene being about five pages plus, so it feels doable without being too easy. I'm really hoping the excitement for this project will carry me through to the end ^-^




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Wow this looks fun (also, I agree with you lol.. the keyword in every NovMo is “try” xD)
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omg i love this so much !! lovers to rivals is such an epic twist on enemies to lovers, and "how frustrating and funny it would be if that happened and then the spouse who was left decides to pursue their spouse's dream and it turns out they're better than them at it" PFFFT this is something i never knew i needed but now i am desperate to read this XDD cheering you on, Plume! :D
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Thank you so much, @ToastK and @Spearmint!!
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Day 1


I swear, I always start Camp NovMo right in the middle of writing something, which always makes me feel like I'm cheating with my first goal. Either way, I worked more on a couple scenes I had the starts of and continued to flesh them out. Hoping to finish maybe both(?) by a week from now, though I've also got papers to write for classes, so we will see how that goes!
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Day 4



I was indeed writing papers instead of my play for the past two days. Still, I managed to write a little bit more today!
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Day 8



Did slightly more today and got hit with the "is this even good" feels. One of my least favorite things about writing a comedy is that if none of the humor lands, you're just stuck with a really boring show. And it's so hard too, because some of that really comes down to the actors as well. Welp. At least it's something! Though definitely harder than it seems to "make something funny."

About my actual goals: have yet to actually finish a scene, but wrote the first page of the first scene, so that's something!
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Day 9



Whoa, two posts in a row? Crazy! I actually got a good bit done tonight. One great thing about writing scripts is that it goes by so fast, especially considering a good length play is maximum 90 pages in google docs. Currently at 13, which I'd say bodes well! I combined what was supposed to be the first two scenes into one, so I'm kind of done with a scene? Ish? In the sense that it was originally finished before I made it segue into the second scene. Overall, though, I'm in a high place currently and am proud of myself!
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oooooo you're doing awesome, Plume! :D i believe in you and your amazing sense of humor ^-^
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Day 16



(Thank you mint ^-^ it's definitely coming along better than I thought it would!)

As of today, I officially am done with the first scene and have made a plan for the rest of Act 1! We're clocking in the first scene at around eleven pages, which is. A bit long. But that's just the way it worked out. I'm excited to write more -- have been more thinking rather than doing lately, but it's been helpful to hammer out some of the plot details! I definitely think I can finish it before the end of the summer, and I'm hoping to at least get act one done before the end of the month. We will see how that goes.
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Day 17



I am thriving this Camp NaNo. Like not to toot my own horn but it's coming along... kinda sorta well? It's longer than my first script ever was. And I'm getting excited about it. I really missed this feeling.

I wrote most of the ~big divorce scene~ today (1.2). Have a snippet.

EMMELINE: Do you hear yourself? Cora, you are the best thing that has ever happened to me.

CORA: Sure. I’ll check back after you get your PhD.
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Camp NovMo Wrap-Up



I know it's not technically the end of the month yet, but I'm preemptively writing this post because I know I probably won't get any more writing done. While I didn't get much done these past couple of weeks since I had papers to write, I still feel proud of the work I have written and for sure plan to finish this project up before the start of the academic year. I'm clocking in at 3,831 words and 22 pages, which is 22 more than I used to have. Yay for Camp NovMo!!
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Yay!! Great work Plume-- it looks like it's coming along great! <3
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