Looking for short stories/first chapters to review

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Haven’t reviewed anything for a bit, so if you’re stuck in green room and want some feedback on your writing, I will be happy to review it! :)
I would appreciate it if in return you would review one of my short stories, but it is not required.
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Hey, there! You're welcome to review the first chapter of my fantasy story "To Paxaria." You can find it in my portfolio on my profile. :) I think I also have a short story called "First Snowfall" or something like that in unsorted.



Find a place inside where there's joy, and the joy will burn out the pain.
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