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Hi Mesh! I love your one/two line poems, it's really cool that you were able to capture so large of an idea in so little words. My favorites out of those are #23 and #24, I love them so much.

Awesome writing, can't wait to read more! <3
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ahhhh!!!!! obsessed with #20
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


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Dang, Mesh, I can't believe I haven't read more of your stuff. The brevity of each poem makes the weight of each word have more punch. Especially in 11 and 14. Gosh the image of making a departed one's recipe but it being void without them is never going to leave my mind. Amazing work <333
I won't go down by myself, but I'll go down with my friends
I'm taking back the life you stole
Came a time when every star fall brought you to tears again

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Ugh. This is going somewhere, but it ain't fast. Have the semi-start of something.

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Medieval Lit! Come here to find out who Chaucer plagiarized and translated - and why and how it worked in the late 1300s.

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we are torn between cleansing and clinging

ohh i always love duality. for a "semi-start" i quite like this poem :]
it is always another hand that guides me.




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Writing is officially a mess right now. I also may not have time to turn on my computer tomorrow, so there may be two on Friday instead.

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Medieval Lit! Come here to find out who Chaucer plagiarized and translated - and why and how it worked in the late 1300s.

I <3 Rydia




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Medieval Lit! Come here to find out who Chaucer plagiarized and translated - and why and how it worked in the late 1300s.

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I think I was trying too hard, and should have just left it at the first line.

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Medieval Lit! Come here to find out who Chaucer plagiarized and translated - and why and how it worked in the late 1300s.

I <3 Rydia




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Mesh! I love your poems and how they say so much in so few lines. <3 Sometimes even one line! It is SO impressive to make a single line an impactful poem!!
There are some really interesting religious themes and I really love #34, especially with the repetition of that last line. :0 And I like #29, I don't know if I understand exactly what it means but I kinda feel it. :)
Also #20-#22 made me chortle. c:
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Medieval Lit! Come here to find out who Chaucer plagiarized and translated - and why and how it worked in the late 1300s.

I <3 Rydia




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Medieval Lit! Come here to find out who Chaucer plagiarized and translated - and why and how it worked in the late 1300s.

I <3 Rydia




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Medieval Lit! Come here to find out who Chaucer plagiarized and translated - and why and how it worked in the late 1300s.

I <3 Rydia




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#36. that. YES. sooo much that. you really get it. spring IS autumn in different clothing.
[soon, i will submit myself to the stars]




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It's another case of it almost doing what I want. Almost.

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(Sadistic Perplexion of Everyone's Wits)

Medieval Lit! Come here to find out who Chaucer plagiarized and translated - and why and how it worked in the late 1300s.

I <3 Rydia



What's the point of being a grown-up if you can't be a bit childish sometimes?
— 4th Doctor