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About me

I am somebody special
That was made
By my father
With his holy hands
A long time ago
And also along
Time ago
My father had
Placed me to live
Here on earth
I love living on earth
My beautiful life
Every single day
I care about
The way my friends
Love me
Also my friends
Are my family
I trust my friends
And I know that
There will be always
Around for me
Even when I am sick
I just don’t like
Being sick
I try to take good care
Of my health
Every single day
Also, was my father
That gave me the
Gift of health
I also never had
Ruin my health
I don’t smoke
At all friends
So I have healthy lungs
Also friends I never drunk
Any alcohol
Because that would destroy
My liver
Friends I also have
Healthy liver
I made a promise to me
That I will stay sober
Forever
Also friends I was born
A Christian
And I will also die
As a Christian
I am glad that
My friends have some
Respect for me
They respect my race
And religion
I am very happy about that

Mein geliebter GOTT
You gave us a wonderful world
For us to live
After you made heaven and earth
Also you had created us after you
Made heaven and earth
The earth you made it
Very well
With flowers by the ocean
Also by the ocean was plenty
Of trees
Some birds you made with your
Holy hands
They already fished their food
To eat
Now they are resting on the tree
Branches
And also singing for us
Their beautiful songs
I personally enjoy hearing the birds
Singing
Now the end of the day
Arrived fast
The sun went down
And we all saw the sunset
Now the night arrived
The birds went back flying
High in the sky
Branches of the trees
Also you made the beautiful ocean
With your holy hands

Hoi hasta calor
Here on earth today
And it is the hottest day
Of the Summer today
It is 48
I can't take the heat
The heat
Is killing all of us
It is very bad for the people
Who have asthma
And heart problem
I am thinking about
Going on for a swim
On lake Ontario
That will cool me off
Also I am not crazy about swimming
I prefer to go for walks
On the boardwalk
First thing in the morning
Because there is nobody around
Also we haven't had any rain for a long
Time
Every day I hope it will rain
But it never does

There is nobody else like you

That made me

Many years ago

With your holy hands

Father I hope

You will keep me alive

Every single day here

On earth

Father we have a good

Relationship going

Like father and son

The reason I am alive

Here is because you made

Me

If you didn't existed

I would not be here
Last edited by 5670 on Sun Sep 15, 2024 11:45 pm, edited 2 times in total.




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Hello friend, a late welcome to YWS! We are so glad to have you here :D I love the formatting of this post- it is very cool and feels like a poem!

I trust my friends
And I know that
There will be always
Around for me
Even when I am sick


I love this! It sounds like you have wonderful friends. I'm so glad that they are so supportive of you and that you love them and trust them so much. I also love what you were saying about the gift of health and taking care of yourself.

And that is cool that you are Canadian too! Anyways, welcome to YWS and please let me know if I can answer any questions or help you with anything. Thanks for all of your encouraging comments you have left already.
Who's to say that my light is better than your darkness? Who's to say death is better than your darkness? Who am I to say?

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welcome to yws!! you can always post this poem (or, poems?) into the publishing_center.php!
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Hi, a hearty welcome to the YWS.

The poem was simply superb.Wonderful poem about the way of life has treated us...if you have been good to ur friends you'll get the same in return and if u have been good to your body it always treats you well.

The whole life in a single poem and thanking the God treat everyone same.



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