Chionophobia #19 /P

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Incandescence
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Sat Jan 13, 2007 6:09 am
Incandescence says... · Sat Jan 13, 2007 6:09 am
Removed.
Last edited by Incandescence on Tue Mar 20, 2007 1:25 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Emerson
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Sat Jan 13, 2007 11:38 pm
Emerson says... · Sat Jan 13, 2007 11:38 pm
WOW. This was just perfect. No errors.

I loved the end. "Like I always do." hee hee hee.

Why was Jon so hesitant to speak about Danielle? Are they having an affair like I guessed might happen! Or was she really upset?

I want more. Hurry up. Or, as you yourself said, I will castrate you.
“It's necessary to have wished for death in order to know how good it is to live.”
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Sun Jan 14, 2007 1:20 am
Riedawriter23 says... · Sun Jan 14, 2007 1:20 am
This was wonderful. I need more! More I tell you. I'm addicted to your writing, it's just so awesome and I feel like all of your characters are real and alive with these problems. And I agree with Claud, I loved the ending XD!
I love, love.
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