love hina

Don't feel you have to ask.

If I were you though, I'd put it in a new thread. Unless, of course, it's also a Love Hina one, in which case I'm sure it'd be fine here. Up to you though.

I'll be back...

Kay.

I'd just like to point out a few things.

1. This is a writing website, and by posting on here you give us the right to assume you wish to improve your writing. Therefore, don't tell us to not criticize your spelling and/or grammar - that's part of writing, too, and if you don't work on it, then it will never get better and you'll lose readers.

2. There is a spell check button below the text window when you post. At least click that before you post and make corrections. It works quite well, and perhaps people would be more interested in reading your work. It really is tiresome to have to guess at what you're trying to spell.

i did...
the damn spelling cow was mocking me...

I agree with Crysi and everyone before me. If you post something, make sure it is decipherable. You expect us to read it, you expect us to make a critique - well, thats what we are doing. It is common courtesy to use proper spelling and grammar. -Would you read something that didn't have it? Truthfully please.

yes i wold . i dont look at how it's written i look at WHAT'S written.

the story in a whole not how each phrase is made
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might i add that i'm not that fond of this one myslef

Okay, okay, I get your point. But proper spelling and grammar make the read easier and more enjoyable. If your writing something, put some effort into it, try to make it as good as possible. Spell check takes only about a few mins if you watch what you are writing.

Yeah, that was a bit stupid. Thanks for pointing out the mistake!

eleinasari wrote: Soellcheck

don't worry im not mocking you ... but if you'r telling some one to use spellcheck you should try to spell it right...

no hard fealings