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Nexus · 2006-12-30T17:02:22Z

Okay, this is an extract from a book I'm currently writing, just wanted some clarity as I'm not sure whether to continue with it or not. ~~~~Extract from Chapter 9~~~~ The last slithers of sunlight faded from over the horizon and a forlorn grey darkness consumed the sky. As the dark clouds massed overhead, like carrion drawn to a carcass, knife-like rain seared down from the heavens. Akin lay there, on the scarred ground, his deep azure eyes fixated on the Great Mora... The hinges began to creak and with sounds like that of a weeping demon the Door began to open. Then the rain was as ice, erupting into glass-like shards as it hit the ground, the granite underfoot was encrusted with a numbing frost, and proceeding from within the depths of the Great Mora Akin could clearly see an emerging talon...

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Sat Dec 30, 2006 7:23 pm

Nexus says... · Sat Dec 30, 2006 7:23 pm

Is No. 2 in any of your work?

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Sat Dec 30, 2006 7:58 pm

Swires says... · Sat Dec 30, 2006 7:58 pm

Yes, Example 2 is a modern piece of mine, It was a little back history in story form, I am still playing around with characters for my newest project.

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Sat Dec 30, 2006 8:02 pm

Nexus says... · Sat Dec 30, 2006 8:02 pm

Good ^^ I like your "bad guy"

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