Rodion's scribbles or poems or both

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A place where I will post my scribbles that I don't know where to put. :D
A lot don't rhyme and those that do probably don't flow great syllable wise. However I enjoy writing them and I like to convince myself that my flaws are who I am and if it's reflected in my work so be it I guess. I do like to improve though and would love suggestions so feel free to offer them :)
Last edited by Rodionandaxe on Mon Sep 13, 2021 8:06 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Dissolve
Like the salt of sea
Unseen but vivid memory

Dissapear
Like the fumes of bloom
The coloured petals' jewellery
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An eye for an eye
Might have the world go blind
But puts the wounded heart at rest
Cools down the soul's fiery tempest
And thats justice
And thats justice

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I understand that forgiveness is a virtue but I also support justice and sometimes they don't go hand in hand. So yeah I guess that's another example of the world being grey and stuff
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The screams
horrified her no longer
the whispers did
the whispers did
For one was real
the other abnormal
so scream she did
so scream she did

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I'd call this one a scribble ;)
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How she wished that beautiful lies
would adorn her reality
but all the false jewelleries
were torn apart by destiny.
She could only shriek and
curse luck for his disloyalty
while honesty stood aside
and shook her head in pity.
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She painted red
and called it happiness
He painted blue
and called it a dream
You can lie
You can hide
but the colours
they will scream

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yup this here is a scribble.
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