A better me

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A better me

Amazing,
Yeah, I’ve been living in an amazing dream.
Nothing,
Yeah, I hope you'll never get taken away from me.

I'm never gonna stop,
I'm never gonna drop,
Ain't no different than it was before.
(Yeah, I love you)

I should take some good advice,
To stop and think twice,
Before I make a stupid mistake,
(One more time.)


[CHORUS]
I’m gonna step up (step up),
Change into a better me
I’m gonna step up (step up),
Change into a better ME.


I love you,
Yeah, I love you with all my heart.
Never,
Yeah, that's never gonna change.

I'm never gonna stop,
I'm never gonna drop,
Ain't no different than it was before.
(Yeah I love you)

I should take some good advice,
To stop and think twice,
Before I make a stupid mistake,
(One more time.)

[CHORUS]
I’m gonna step up (step up),
Change into a better me
I’m gonna step up (step up),
Change into a better ME.


Change into a better me………

Change into a better me………
The purpose of life is to fight maturity.




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ARGH the repetition, lol.
Ok, Its not my type of thing, I think you knew that already.
Couldn't you change the use of "step up" though?
I mean, I understand that iys repetition as in song lyrics but a little bit of..... variety would be good.
Keep working on it though :D
lexy xxx
When did I realize I was God? Well, I was praying and I suddenly realized I was talking to myself. - Peter O'Toole




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Ok, i'll do some work on it stay tuned. xxx
The purpose of life is to fight maturity.



"would you still love me if i was a worm" yeah babe i would AND id get you your own compost bin so we could enter gardening competitions together
— Corvid