JabberHut wrote:4. I love this story! Despite all the flaws I found, I love what I have and want to make it better. I want to make more sense of it, and I am so grateful that I had the motivation to keep writing through the month.
HERE WE GO AGAIN!!
This has gotten such a major revamp in the last year. I still have holes to fill, but a LOT has been fleshed out better. Things make more sense, characters are more fleshed out, plot actually has reason and purpose to it. ...And Matthias gets his own PoV. It happened.
The title also needs to be changed because this no longer takes place in Germany. But I could also edit things so that it does. So I'm not really sure, but a German title makes no sense if German has nothing to do with the story now. XD But for my mind's sake, I'm keeping it as is!
Spoiler
Anneliese, a partially deaf violinist who happens to be the daughter of the beloved late duke. She is raised by her strict stepmother, who has only one thing in mind: To live wealthy. And that means, Anneliese needs to marry. And considering their financial burdens now, she has to marry fast. Fortunately, the Sixth Prince is a conveniently eligible bachelor.
As long as she has her violin, she'll be okay.
Matthias, a banished son of a count, settles down with a wife and finds himself working for a small entertainment company as their pianist. Unfortunately, he soon discovers that musical entertainment is merely a cover for an extremist group out to kill off the royal family and high-ranking nobles. Under the threat of losing his loved ones, Matthias has no choice but to do as they wish, murder being a common request.
And his next task is to kill Anneliese.
Now the death toll is rising in the whole state. Anneliese must learn to find her voice if she plans to save her people and keep her stepmother's selfish plans at bay. Matthias has to find a way to leave the extremists and seek help before the people he cares about are mercilessly killed before his very eyes... including Anneliese.
Can Anneliese figure out why her people are dying, and can she put a stop to it despite her handicaps? And can she do it all while juggling her newfound feelings for a wanted murderer? Will Matthias go through with the murder, or will his heart's desire be the motivation he needs to free himself and save what remains of his family?
As long as she has her violin, she'll be okay.
Matthias, a banished son of a count, settles down with a wife and finds himself working for a small entertainment company as their pianist. Unfortunately, he soon discovers that musical entertainment is merely a cover for an extremist group out to kill off the royal family and high-ranking nobles. Under the threat of losing his loved ones, Matthias has no choice but to do as they wish, murder being a common request.
And his next task is to kill Anneliese.
Now the death toll is rising in the whole state. Anneliese must learn to find her voice if she plans to save her people and keep her stepmother's selfish plans at bay. Matthias has to find a way to leave the extremists and seek help before the people he cares about are mercilessly killed before his very eyes... including Anneliese.
Can Anneliese figure out why her people are dying, and can she put a stop to it despite her handicaps? And can she do it all while juggling her newfound feelings for a wanted murderer? Will Matthias go through with the murder, or will his heart's desire be the motivation he needs to free himself and save what remains of his family?
