Ignition

[FYI I deleted the text b/c parents may know about my YWS now. Shame, but they're real strict and conservative sometimes. They don't like sexual allusions and they sure as hell don't care for Rammstein.]

I don't critique poetry much but I saw 'rammstein' I don't think I've heard the song mentioned, the only albums I have are Mutter and the album with Du Has in it (I forget what its called...) They're pretty good! I like the song 'klavir' (sp?)

But, anyway! I liked this, gasoline and fire brings such a good mental image, I can literally smell the gasoline as I read this.

No bitter coffee to awake me from my mourning coma

I really liked this line and the play on mourning/morning. Seemed in true rammstein spirit; a play on words!

I liked it