Rhyme!

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Rhyme rhymes with time
And thyme
And 'Go out to dine'
You can cut down a pine
Or say that you're fine
Or, rather marvelously, wonderfully divine
You can look at a sign
Or tap a brass chime
And if you're daring--commit a crime
Go get gold from a mine!
Go have bread and wine!
And when you're finished, go soak cakes in wine!
Draw me a line,
Or color a nine!
Go swim in the Rhine!
But for gosh sakes, you lime
You irritating, aggravating, nauseating mime
DO NOT FORGET TO RHYME!!!
"....I hold with those who favor fire", Frost




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Weird, but I liked it! It was really cute! I am so going to have to try one of those poems! :D
"I will have to tell you, you have bewitched me body and soul..." --Mr. Darcy, P & P, 2005 movie
"You pierce my soul." --Cpt. Frederick Wentworth

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Hehehe... very Shel Silversteinish of you. ;)

This is my favorite poem of yours so far since, though the images it gives are very strange and unconventional, it still gives concrete images instead of abstract ideas.
Ubi caritas est vera, Deus ibi est.

"The mark of your ignorance is the depth of your belief in injustice and tragedy. What the caterpillar calls the end of the world, the Master calls the butterfly." ~ Richard Bach

Moth and Myth <- My comic! :D




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really, really fun. it's kinda nice to see you doing something less...er, morbid. not that I don't like your other stuf, but, hey, it's me!
"In a sort of ghastly simplicity we remove the organ and demand the function...We laugh at honour and are shocked to find traitors in our midst. We castrate and bid the geldings be fruitful." ~C.S. Lewis



if you're going to commit food crimes be civilized
— Moonlily