Hey everyone, I need some feedback on a blurb I have written for the second book in my Heroes of Aldrizhon series.
Story blurb:
War! The battle for the throne of the kingdom of Britarion continues. Prince Zander Tyzan, the rightful heir continues to attract more freefolk to his cause. But now the young Prince has a new problem- a lack of resources to support his growing army.
When a noble house of moderate power and wealth approach Prince Zander with an offer of an alliance, the young Prince jumps at it. But the young Prince soon learns that every alliance comes with a price.
