I need people to review my poem

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I need people to help review my poem, it's called In the fields and is a historical fiction. Here is the link :)

In The Fields




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"Words say little to the mind compared to space thundering with images and crammed with sounds."

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Owning our story can be hard but not nearly as difficult as spending our lives running from it. Embracing our vulnerabilities is risky but not nearly as dangerous as giving up on love and belonging and joy—the experiences that make us the most vulnerable. Only when we are brave enough to explore the darkness will we discover the infinite power of our light.
— Brené Brown