I need people to review my poem

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SinisterPotatoe
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Sat Nov 21, 2015 9:21 pm
SinisterPotatoe says... · Sat Nov 21, 2015 9:21 pm
I need people to help review my poem, it's called In the fields and is a historical fiction. Here is the link :)

In The Fields
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deletedaug23
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Sat Nov 21, 2015 10:37 pm
deletedaug23 says... · Sat Nov 21, 2015 10:37 pm
no

"Words say little to the mind compared to space thundering with images and crammed with sounds."

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By the sweat of your brow you will eat your food until you return to the ground, since from it you were taken; for dust you are and to dust you will return.
— Genesis 3:19