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Soul Dance: Now Revised

Wiggy · 2006-05-11T00:55:45Z

Soul Dance Dance Dance ‘til your heart erupts out of your chest And foxtrots over the moon: One two three, one two three- Relentlessly seizing your emotions And baring your soul to the star-ridden sky. Dance Dance until your feet float off the ground And the wind whisks you away To the deepest caverns of your heart, Where you waltz until dawn, And the sunrise floods your soul with its glory. Dance Dance until the love washes over you, Like the foaming, rushing tide That rumbas into the fiery sunset, Casting its yellow, orange, and red rays Into the setting sun of your own soul.

Niamh

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Thu Aug 17, 2006 6:59 am

Niamh says... · Thu Aug 17, 2006 6:59 am

Great imagery--I know you've heard that already--but that's a good thing. I love the last stanza. This isn't usually the kind of poem that would intrigue me, but I think this is very cute. Simplicity can be good, and you proved that without using juvenile words. Great job!

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Soul Dance: Now Revised

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