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Last edited by JumpyDot on Fri Mar 09, 2018 7:44 pm, edited 1 time in total.




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Title: Darkman's Hour, Prologue
Length: 600+ words
Genre: Realistic fiction
Logline: A girl's best friend falls into a coma.

Darkman's Hour: Prologue

That is the link to it :)
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Title: The Story of Monoceros
Length: About 500 words
Genre: Fantasy
Logline: A fairy helps a unicorn.

The Story of Monoceros
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Hello! I like that you have given a specific layout of what you will be reviewing like. I am in need of reviews, and would be delighted to review anything for u if you would just ask of me. Here is the link to one of the chapters I need reviewed.

Where the Black Sheep Wrest - (Ch. 13): Reign Check




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I bought a cactus. A week later it died. I got depressed because I thought Damn, I am less nurturing than a desert.
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Title : Bling, Prologue
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Genre : Science Fiction, Fantasy
Logline : A girl finds a crystal world of it's own kind
Link : Bling - Prologue

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- Title : A Sweet Game of Suicide
- Length : 1106 words
- Genre: Horror
- Logline : A boy and a girl play a dangerous game.

Link : A Sweet Game of Suicide

I would like to get any reviews for this one... And it sounds like I would love one of yours!

Thank you :D




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A Not-So-True Story of a Man Named Earl Higgins.

Earl Higgins was forty three
He had good intentions
And a wife named Marie.

He made her breakfast in bed,
washed all her clothes,
and bought wigs for her head.

Marie stayed in the basement,
though he didn't mind.
It was always Earl, who came and who went.

Earl always bought Marie flowers,
and held her hand,
and poor Marie needed help with her showers.

Except for Marie didn't talk,
but Earl couldn't tell,
it was always Earl Higgins that went out to walk.

Earl finally was caught,
and the flowers stopped coming.
It was a waste-- the things that he bought.

No more breakfast in bed,
Because Earl was in prison,
And poor Marie was dead.



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LynseyStaggs wrote:A Not-So-True Story of a Man Named Earl Higgins.

Earl Higgins was forty three
He had good intentions
And a wife named Marie.

He made her breakfast in bed,
washed all her clothes,
and bought wigs for her head.

Marie stayed in the basement,
though he didn't mind.
It was always Earl, who came and who went.

Earl always bought Marie flowers,
and held her hand,
and poor Marie needed help with her showers.

Except for Marie didn't talk,
but Earl couldn't tell,
it was always Earl Higgins that went out to walk.

Earl finally was caught,
and the flowers stopped coming.
It was a waste-- the things that he bought.

No more breakfast in bed,
Because Earl was in prison,
And poor Marie was dead.



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Thanks for the request, but I can't review it here. Please post it and provide a link and I will look into it.




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I draw a pretty loose line on that first rule though, but please supply the reason for the rating and I'll look into it.




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