The Safari Zone

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Idea credit to the amazing @Audy!

Welcome to the Safari Zone!


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Use the following template to request reviews for your works this review day.

Pokemon trainers on the road to becoming Pokemon Masters can then browse here for the works they'd like to address.

Here's an example:


The View From Your Eyes by rhiasofia!
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Type: [Poetry] [Romantic]
Weak against line-by-line critiques.



For the first Type, please indicate the type of work it is based on the categories for the Elite Eight Challenge. For the second Type, indicate the genre.



Okay, let's get to safari-ing! Here's your code to use:

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[quote][url=PROVIDETHELINKTOYOURWORKHERE]TITLE OF YOUR WORK[/url] by [user]YOURUSERNAME[/user]!
[img]http://cdn.bulbagarden.net/upload/6/60/120MS.png[/img]
Type: [[color=#000000]TYPE OF WORK[/color]] [[color=#FF8000]GENRE[/color]
[i]Weak against ... WHAT CONCERNS WOULD YOU WANT REVIEWS TO ADDRESS?[/i][/quote]


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i will watch you from the earth by Lumi!
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Type: [Poetry] [Lyrical]
Weak against content & execution analysis!
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.




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Points 3558
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Together Or Not At All by Sunshine!
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Type: [Short Story] [Realistic
Weak against ... Transition of events and how that affect characters (also, title issues)
I have loved the words and I have hated them. I only hope I have made them right.

---The Book Thief---

Hi, I'm Sunshine! It's lovely to meet you!




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something else by Iggy!
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Type: [Poetry] [None]
Weak against flow improvements.
“I can't go back to yesterday because I was a different person then."
- Lewis Carroll




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Points 1030
Reviews 1260
Homecoming (Act 1) & (Act 2) by Elinor Brynn!
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Type: [Script] [Drama]
Weak against ... Dialogue, Plot

All our dreams can come true — if we have the courage to pursue them.

-- Walt Disney




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Cat Steps 1.1 by Rosey Unicorn!
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Type: [Novels] [Fantasy
Weak against... Pacing, description, infodumping
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.



Everyone you will ever meet knows something you don't.
— Bill Nye