Please Review My New Poem & Inform Me For Any Grammar Errors

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Hey, I'm Cole. c:
I am trying to learn Old Grammar and Early Modern Grammar. I've been practicing a little and wrote a poem. I was hoping one of you lovely human beings could review it and check for grammar errors; since I'm new to this style and all. I'd honestly, really appreciate it.
Thank you. c:

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-Coley



That's how we should measure our lives. Not in distance traveled, or time passed, or worlds conquered, but in moments... and the rush of joy—of grace—that exists within them.
— Megatron (Lost Light, by Roberts, Lawrence, Lafuente)