Technical Reviews

I will do reviews on any type of work. Leave the link in the comments and I will review ASAP.

Included in the review will be....
-my personal opinion
-overused words
-sentence variation
-cliches
-dictition
-vague words
& -consistency

I'd love it if you could review these chapters!

ch1: work.php?id=96771
ch2: work.php?id=96956

It'd be great if you could review this for me! : work.php?id=97043

I'd really appreciate it if you could maybe review this short story: http://youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97037

Thank you

Twit wrote:I'd love it if you could review these chapters!

ch1: work.php?id=96771
ch2: work.php?id=96956

I will get the reviews done by tonight

SpeedyPencil wrote:It'd be great if you could review this for me! : work.php?id=97043

I will get the review done by tonight

Crimsona wrote:I'd really appreciate it if you could maybe review this short story: http://youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97037

Thank you

I will get ht review done tonight