One thing I'd advise you to do is work on your shading. It looks uneven and patchy this way. But don't worry! I'm sure with some practice you'll get it! And btw, it is totally cute.
Also, I can see you've got a thing for colours... That can easily turn into something more passionate, so keep working on it, k? ^u^
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How cute! I really like the creative idea of adding colors to every corner! Your use of crayons brings out the child in me, too, and I think to all the viewers also!
I also like the the movement of the work, both realistic--animals under the sea--and abstract--color splashes and strange patterns. This aspect brings out the uniqueness of the piece, making it a special one ! Next time, just be very sensible with the crayola so that you can splash color to every corner
Your pal, Al
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