This is very good! I mean, you're very good at this. I'd only say that I want to see the bigger version of this. If you can resize it then that'd be great. Do keep posting more.
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I don't know either of these characters very well, but I still like this x)
It's really interesting that you didn't edit because the colors look really vivid O_O. It's my favorite thing about this drawing! I looked at the full picture, and I could tell you put a ton of detail into the coloring. You'd add purple hues into the blue jeans or orange and brown into the yellow ones. I love that kind of stuff!
I have to applaud you on the poses, because I can't imagine drawing anything more difficult O_O. They're like... dancing and roller skating and holding umbrellas and Ikki looks like he's about to moon us... craziness I tell you!
I don't really know what to say about the pose. It is confusing, but it's also kinda interesting at the same time. So I guess that's a good thing!
Keep drawing! I can definitely see improvement!
The bad news is we don't have any control. The good news is we can't make any mistakes. -Chuck Palahniuk