PLEASE REVIEW MY WORK

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Black Ghost
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Sat Feb 04, 2006 11:34 pm
Black Ghost says... · Sat Feb 04, 2006 11:34 pm
I'm working on "The Deafening Rainfall" and i would appreciated it if someone would read and review it.


Its a really cool story about a female warrior who enters a contest to become protector of her country called Samutone. But no one said the contest would be easy.




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zell
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Tue Feb 14, 2006 2:46 pm
zell says... · Tue Feb 14, 2006 2:46 pm
whats your plot you need a plot well you could to make the story intresting




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Griffinkeeper
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Tue Feb 14, 2006 3:42 pm
Griffinkeeper says... · Tue Feb 14, 2006 3:42 pm
If you need your work critiqued, PM a person who can help you or ask in your story.

This is the autobiography portion of the site, not the "please help me" section.

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