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Can someone look over my lyrics for me?

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  1. Carlito
    Carlito · Apr 14, 2009
    In a story I'm currently working on, it's about this band called Addix. They are going through the process of writing their songs and getting their CD out and whatnot. I'm a freak and when I wrote about them writing these songs, I wanted there to be some actual songs, so I wrote twelve of them.
    I would really like some feedback on them because I don't know if they're any good and I really want them to be.
    If you go to my portfolio, there are three threads, Addix Songs Part 1, 2, and 3.
    I'll give you some points if you want in return for reviews b/c there are kind of a lot of songs.
    Any help is much appreciated!

    Thanks much :D
    -Carly


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