You guys wanna help me? I'm afraid of posting my writing up here, thinking that people my steal it. So email can work. I'm sort of stuck on what I want my main character to perceive. I have many ideas.
Poetry is my cheap means of transportation. By the end of the poem the reader should be in a different place from where he started. I would like him to be slightly disoriented at the end, like I drove him outside of town at night and dropped him off in a cornfield. — Billy Collins